 NS | Skrevet 20/12-07 23:48 | Hejsa
Jeg skal aflevere min større skriftlige opgave i morgen, men er ikke alt for hård til engelsk. Er det en venlig sjæl der vil kigge følgende igennem og komme med forslag til rettelser?
The study investigates the connections between the ideological basis of the Soviet union, and the way this was transformed into the build up of a new society, especially during the reign of Lenin. It also discusses how large influence ideologies had during Stalin's reign of terror. The study is based on literature with different approaches to the subject, e.g. texts by Marx and Lenin, and literature covering the birth of the Soviet Union. By covering Lenin's interpretation of Marx´ theories concerning the power of the elite, and Lenin's violent creation of the Soviet union, the study concludes that Stalin´s escalation of violence in several ways was a continuation of the direction started by Lenin. Another conclusion drawn is that a specific interpretation of an ideological can play a crucial part in any society.
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 Jmog | Skrevet 21/12-07 07:24 | I nedenstående har jeg tilføjet rettelser i paranteser:
The study investigates the connections between the ideological basis of the Soviet union(<-Union), and the way this(<-it) was transformed into the build up(<-beginning, cornerstone, start) of a new society, especially during the reign of Lenin. It also discusses how large (an) influence ideologies had during Stalin's reign of terror. The study is based on literature with different approaches to the subject, e.g. texts by Marx and Lenin, and literature covering the birth of the Soviet Union. By covering Lenin's interpretation of Marx´ theories concerning the power of the elite, and Lenin's violent creation of the Soviet union(<-Union), the study concludes that Stalin´s escalation of violence in several ways was a continuation of the direction started by Lenin. Another conclusion drawn is that a specific interpretation of an ideological(<-ideology) can play a crucial part in any society. |
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 SeventhSun | Skrevet 21/12-07 15:34 | "It also discusses how large (an) influence ideologies had during Stalin's reign of terror."
ville jeg skrive som:
"It also discusses how much (of an) influence ideologies had during Stalin's reign of terror."
Fordi det ikke er en fysisk ting, men et begreb.
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| MrCase | Skrevet 21/12-07 15:38 | The study investigates the connections between the ideological basis of the Soviet union, and the way this was transformed into the (build up) (=formation) of a new society, especially during the reign of Lenin. (It also) (=Also, it) discusses (how large influence ideologies had)(=the impact of ideologies) during Stalin's reign of terror. The study is based on literature with different approaches to the subject, e.g. texts by Marx and Lenin, and literature covering the birth of the Soviet Union. By covering Lenin's interpretation of Marx´ theories concerning the power of the elite(,)(= ) and Lenin's violent creation of the Soviet union, the study concludes that Stalin´s escalation of violence in several ways was a continuation of the direction started by Lenin. (Another conclusion drawn is)(=Furthermore, it concludes) that a specific interpretation of an (ideological)(=Ideology) can play a crucial part in any society.
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